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Name: Djay Payne
Affiliation: Kumogakure
Rank: Shichidaime Raikage

PostSubject: Raikage    Wed Jul 14, 2010 7:06 pm

Personal Information

Birthdate: April 4th

Birthsign: Tauros

Name: Djay Payne

Nickname: Grand Storm, Taijutsu Master, Drunken Storm

Personality: Djay has a slightly serious personality to those he doesn’t know. Around strangers he is very knowledgeable and speaks with such an intense charisma that many have been surprised at him at a young age when he used to have conversations with intense words of deep meaning. Though, when he is with family and friends, he is much more tolerable. He makes jokes as well as teases the people he knows. Djay has a great sence of pride, trust, and love for his country, but his real love he dedicates to his daughter and wife. The only time Djay is a perv is around his wife.

Likes: Training, leading his country, Loving/hating his wife, protecting his kid

Dislikes: Snotty people, people who underestimate him, people whom think they are all powerful, not knowing where his daughter is.

Physical Information

Gender: male

Age: 37

Height: 5.11

Weight: 150

Hair Color: Black

Eye Color: Black

General Appearance:

Clan Information

Clan: Payne

Kekke Genkai/Hiden: None

Head of the Household: Djay Payne

Social Information

Family: Hikari-Wife(+)Cailina-Daughter
Friends: (List notable friends of your character, they can be made up.)

Ninja Status

Affiliation: Kumogakure

Ninja Registration: 999998

Rank: Kage

Class: S
Academy Graduation Age: 10

Chunin Promotion Age: 13
Chakra Information

Nature: Lightning/Wind

Specialization: Nintaijutsu

Jutsu

1.)
Type:Lightning
Nature: Taijutsu
Rank: A
Class: Offensive, defensive
Name: lightning release armor
Description: By wrapping the users body in a layer of Lightning chakra, the user can electrically stimulate his nervous system and speed up his neural synapses to react faster to danger and push his physical prowess to the absolute limit, allowing him to gain tremendous raw speed and power.

While using this technique, the users reflexes are comparable to that of the Fourth Hokage, making it difficult, if not impossible, even for the Sharingan to keep up with the user. The strength is also heightened enough to make his strikes cause enormous amounts of damage to whatever they strike. The armor also increases his defense, drastically reducing, if not completely negating, damage from incoming attacks as even a direct Chidori was barely able to pierce the chest.
Limitations: lasts a total of 10 posts in a thread?

2.)
Type:Ninjutsu
Nature: Lightning
Rank: A
Class:Paralysis
Name: Raiton: Shichuu Shibari - Four Pillar Binding
Description: When the user forms the necessary hand seals, four pillars rise from the ground around the target. Once they fully emerge, lightning will strike at a single or multiple enemies caught inside the area, dealing light damage and paralyzing them. The scale of this technique can vary from an area of forty square feet to one large enough to contain a gigantic summoning creature and it depends on the target's size. The paralysis lasts a minute (2 posts), during which the target will be defenseless, but it takes the pillars some time to appear. (1 post time to get ready)
Limitations: cooldown of 3 posts


3.)
Type: taijutsu/ninjutsu
Nature: Lightning
Rank: A
Class: Offensive
Name: Lightning Oppression Horizontal (雷虐水平, Raigyaku Suihei)
Description: After covering the user in his/her Lightning Release Armor, the user performs a simple backhand chop against his opponent, with a powerful and quick force of lightning chakra behind it causing devastating amount of damage.
Limitations: fullest potential in Lightning Armor


4.)
Type: Ninjutsu
Nature: lightning
Rank: B
Class: Supplementary/Offensive
Name: Raiton: Rai Bunshin no Jutsu - Lightning Clone Technique
Description: This technique creates a physical replication of the user made from lightning. It acts like a normal clone with a physical form and has the full physical and jutsu ability of the user, though it is still quite limited in chakra amount. When it is hit, the clone will burst into lightning, effectively shocking anyone who was within two feet of it and dealing light damage to anyone who was touching it. It doesn't require many hand seals to be executed. Any special weapons the user may have had on them when using this jutsu will be copied partially, losing any special qualities the original has. The Lightning Clone can perform a few C rank or below lightning jutsu the user has, but in doing so it loses it's shocking damage.
Limitations: up to 6 clones

5.)
Type: taijutsu/ninjutsu
Nature: lightning/Wind
Rank: A
Class: offensive
Name: Raging Thrust
Description: After covering the user in his/her Lightning Release Armor, the user will thrust one or two of his fists at his target. this power in incredibly powerfull and can easily level a building. though, this attack also releases a minor shock wave through wind type justu with a reach of 30 feet. the wind is incredibly strong and can send back weapons, attacks, and even people away from the user. the electrical current in the air may also paralyze the target for a maximum of 2 posts. (kage levels are not affected by the paralysis)
Limitations: fullest potential in Lightning Armor

6.)
Type: Tai/Nin
Nature: lightning
Rank: A
Class: Offensive
Name: Giga bomb
Description: After covering the user in his/her Lightning Release Armor, the user grabs his/her opponent and lifts them high into the air. Then, using his extreme strength, he/her smashes them head first onto the ground in what resembles a powerbomb maneuver. This is devastating enough to shatter the ground itself on impact. This is a similar technique to version of the Reverse Lotus, but more destructive.
Limitations: fullest potential in Lightning Armor

7.)
Type: Tai/Nin
Nature: lightning
Rank: A
Class: Offensive
Name: Guillotine Drop
Description: After covering the user in his/her Lightning Release Armor, the user jumps into the air and preforms a downward kick on his opponent. This technique is very similar to a basic leg drop, but with alot more force behind it.
Limitations: once committed to the attack, the user can NOT stop. fullest potential in Lightning Armor

8.)
Type: Taijutsu/Ninjutsu
Nature: lightning
Rank: S
Class: Defensive/Offensive/Supplementary
Name: Kagou Kirin (princess Kirin)
Description: This ability can only be used after one masters the lightning release armor. The user will than sacrifice minimal chakra in order to turn the lightning release armor into black and red lightning. Doing this increases all the qualities of the lightning release armor 3 fold. The armor release will also release a current of black electricity outward 10 meters away from the user, this can even paralyze kage level shinobi for a short period of time. (max one post). For any shinobi lower, it can range from minutes to even hours. (anything lower than kage level are paralyzed for the whole thread.)though, since this power is such a strain on the body, one the jutsu is over, the user will experience great physical pain and will have to be healed for a time span of a week.l (5 days)
Limitations: lasts 4 posts

9.)
Type: Taijutsu
Nature: -
Rank: B
Class: Offensive
Name: Kaimon - Opening Gate
Description: First of the Eight Celestial Gates. This gate is located in the left hemisphere of the brain, and releases brains limits over the muscles of the body, allowing one to use their full strength. This increases their strength five times, but strains the muscles a lot.
Limitations: -6 post duration

10.)
Type: Taijutsu
Nature: -
Rank: B
Class: Offenisve
Name: Kyuumon - Rest Gate
Description:Second of the Eight Celestial Gates. This gate releases the brain's limit on the body's stamina, making a battle-worn person become miraculously ready to fight as if the fight had just started. This drains their long-term stamina a lot, and will make them have to rest for a long time afterwards.
Limitations: -6 post duration

11.)
Type: Taijutsu
Nature: -
Rank: A
Class: Offensive
Name: Seimon - Life Gate
Description:Third of the Eight Celestial Gates. This gate is located at the top of the spine. When one opens this gate, it releases the limit on the nervous and blood circulation systems, which makes information travel at a faster rate and increases their speed and agility two times. As a side effect, the user's skin turns red, indicating an increased blood flow speed. This drains mental energy and puts a strain on the user's lungs and blood circulation system.
Limitations: -5 post duration

12.)
Type: Taijutsu
Nature: -
Rank: A
Class: Offensive
Name: Shoumon - Wound Gate
Description: Forth of the Eight Celestial Gates. This gate is located at the middle of the spine, and when opened, releases the limit on oxygen intake in the lungs, creating much more oxygen for the body to use, somewhat reducing the strain on the lungs and increasing the user's stamina. However, it further strains the blood circulation system. It also shuts off the pain receptors in the brain, allowing one to ignore injuries for the most part. However, it also slows the rate at which the body heals afterwards, because the brain cannot properly react to the damage the body took.
Limitations: -5 post duration

13.)
Type: Taijutsu
Nature: -
Rank: A
Class: Offensive
Name: Tomon - Limit Gate
Description: Fifth of the Eight Celestial Gates. This gate is located along the spine, just below the forth. It releases the limit on the amount of chakra released at one time. It allows the user to force chakra into their muscles to further double their speed, strength and agility. However, doing so highly increases the strain on the muscles as well, and without exercising caution, one could rip their own muscles.
Limitations: -4 post duration

14.)
Type: Taijutsu
Nature: -
Rank: S
Class: Offensive
Name: Keimon - View Gate
Description: Sixth of the Eight Celestial Gates. This gate is located along the spine, just below the fifth. When opened, this gate removes the limit on how much fat and proteins the intestines can digest, and releases otherwise useless energy resources, giving the user the even more stamina. Naturally, this puts a high strain on all the organs and will result in undernourishment later on.
Limitations: -4 post duration

15.)
Type: Taijutsu
Nature: S
Class: Offensive
Name: Kyoumon - Wonder Gate
Description: Seventh of the Eight Celestial Gates. This gate is located at the bottom of the spine. It removes the limit on how fast the body can move, removes wastes from dead skin cells to feces, and gives the body a much cleaner system to work with. This further increases the user's speed by half and results in less fatigue, but puts extreme strain on the whole body, especially the liver and kidneys.
Limitations:-3 post duration

16.)
Type: Taijutsu
Nature: -
Rank: S
Class: Offensive
Name: Shimon - Death Gate
Description: The final gate of the Eight Celestial Gates. This gate is located at the heart. Opening this gate uses up all of the body's energy. It makes the heart pump at maximum power and exceeds the power of every other gate. All the energy in every individual cell is used up, giving the user incredible power and increasing their speed, strength and agility two times yet again. However, after opening the gate, the user will surely die, since it basically burns up all of their body's resources for maximum energy output.
Limitations: -you die after using it, 3 post duration

17.)
Type: Taijutsu
Nature: -
Rank: D
Class:Illusionary to an extent
Name: Body flicker
Description: This jutsu is a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short to long distances at an almost untraceable speed. To an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported. A puff of smoke is occasionally used to disguise the user's movements. It is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily vitalise the body and move at extreme speeds. The amount of chakra required depends on the overall distance and elevation between the user and their intended destination. Shisui Uchiha was feared as "Shisui of the Body Flicker" (瞬身のシスイ, Shunshin no Shisui), likely referring to this technique.

The Body Flicker Technique has various variations among the different hidden villages, all of which involve some extra element aside from the movement itself. The extra element is usually some sort of substance used to distract the opponent, such as leaves or sand.
Limitations:-

18.)
Type: Taijutsu
Nature: -
Rank: A
Class: Offensive/Evasive
Name: drunken fist style
Description:
Limitations:-

Special Ability

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19.)
Type: Taijutsu
Nature: -
Rank: B
Class: Offensive
Name: Uber Flick!
Description: this attack is strong, but yet it is still odd. this attack focuses a ton of power into a mere finger of the user. than, with one flick, the user can knock away an enemy pretty far with shear power. this attack doesn't do intense damage, but it can hurt a lot and send you flieing.
Limitations:-

20.)
Type: Taijutsu
Nature: -
Rank:C
Class:Offensive/Destraction
Name: 10 inch Distraction!
Description: This ability is a very crude and innaprpriate ability, but it can work at times. With this ability, Djay can make a simple clone and run or hide with near blinding speed so that the taget(s) think the clone is still the real djay. than, the clone will pull down his pants and trousers to reveal the 10 inch....yea. this attack is pure distraction at the clone moon's and flails around.
Limitations:-

Additional Jutsu

Arsenal

Ninja Tools:
X10 smoke bomb
X10 kunai
X10 shuriken

Primary Weapon: Fists

Secondary Weapon: none

Biography & RP-Sample

Biography:

Ninja introduction
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Road to kage and road to marriage?

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Current


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RP-Sample: (The RP-sample should be at least 10-12 sentences.)


as Djay was working on paper work sitting in his chair behind his desk, he began to think of what he had done in the past. he remembered that as a child he thought himself as he God of Taijutsu, but later he learned that there were no Gods, only man. Even the powerful Rennigan users were only mortal. he sighed, People who believed they were a god though, were less than human. Humans were the highest rank to him, but people and their greed for power were much lower in standards. Again, he sighed. he believed himself equal to his people, one of them even to an extent, though he had heard rumors that there were still Ninja out there wanting war and destruction, and he sought out to make sure that didn't happen. he smiled as he looked through the paper and found a note. he held a very questionable look as he read. he was still happy and feeling extremely poetic after his thoughts when he read, "Dear Djay, clean the bathroom and vacuum the kitchen. its dirty. if you dont clean it, it only proves how worthless you can be at times. Love you so much, Hikari.". he stopped reading it as he groaned and slammed his head into the table. what a drag.


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PostSubject: Re: Raikage    Thu Jul 15, 2010 12:28 pm

I'm checking your jutsu...

1) Your Lightning Release Armor needs a post-count duration.

2) Your Four Pillar Binding will need a post-count cooldown.

3) Your Lightning Oppression Horizontal can only be used to its fullest with the Lightning Armor active, correct?

4) You'll need to limit how many clones your character can make up to (1-15) and for how long they last upon being out. Also, your lightning clones are probably B-rank, not A-rank.

5) Raging Thrust can only be used to its fullest when the Lightning Release Armor is active, correct?

6) For your 6th Jutsu, it requires the Lightning Release Armor to be used to its fullest, correct?

7) Guillotine Drop can only be used at its fullest with Lightning Release Armor active, correct?

8.) For your Kagou Kirin, you'll need to lower the duration to about 4 posts since it is very, very powerful.

9) You'll need a duration for each of the eight gates release.

10) For your Specialization you cannot Specialize in Taijutsu and Ninjutsu... However, you can Specialize in Nintaijutsu - which are jutsu that use Ninjutsu and Taijutsu to create a technique of its own.

Once all of this is edited, I'll take a second look.

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Affiliation: Kumogakure
Rank: Shichidaime Raikage

PostSubject: Re: Raikage    Fri Jul 16, 2010 11:46 am

ite, edited
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PostSubject: Re: Raikage    Fri Jul 16, 2010 12:00 pm

1) You'll need to limit how many clones your character can make up to (1-15) and for how long they last upon being out. Also, your lightning clones are probably B-rank, not A-rank.

2) For your Specialization you cannot Specialize in Taijutsu and Ninjutsu... However, you can Specialize in Nintaijutsu - which are jutsu that use Ninjutsu and Taijutsu to create a technique of its own.

Otherwise, the app. looks a lot better. I'll take a second look when you've edited your app a bit.



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PostSubject: Re: Raikage    Fri Jul 16, 2010 12:03 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Raikage    Fri Jul 16, 2010 12:16 pm

Alright, looks good.

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