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Name: Felix Pyre
Affiliation: Celestial Dragons (Konohagakure)
Rank: Sage (S)

PostSubject: Felix Pyre-Sage   Sun Jul 18, 2010 4:07 pm

Personal Information

Birthdate: November 20

Birthsign: Scorpio

Name: Felix Pyre

Nickname: Dragon Sage

Personality: Pyre is considered by many a very quiet type of person, only speaking if he has something important to say, or when spoken too. He has never been one to go pick a fight but, when he is challenged Pyre never backs away. When graced with down time most will often find him asleep under something high off the ground. Often when working a mission Felix will find himself in a conversation with himself, confusing whoever is around him.

Likes: (
  • Reading
  • Sparring
  • Spicy foods
  • Writing poetry
  • Playing chess with Tala or AuRel


Dislikes:
  • Being interrupted during his reading
  • Laziness
  • Boiled eggs
  • Mushrooms
  • Listening to AuRon and RuGuuard arguing.



Physical Information

Gender: Male

Age: 26

Height: 6ft 4 inches

Weight: 195lbs

Hair Color: Gray

Eye Color: Amber

General Appearance: ]
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Social Information

Family: None Felix gave up his family ties as part of his agreement when he began his sage training with the dragons.

Friends: To be added later

Ninja Status

Affiliation: Konohagakure

Ninja Registration: 8 6 4 2 5 1

Rank: (Sage.)

Class: (S-rank for Sage.)

Academy Graduation Age: 10

Chunin Promotion Age: 11

Sage Information

Pact-species: Celestial Dragons

Pact-members: AuRel, AuRon, Wistala, RuGuuard

Nature: Nature(sage?)/Lightning
Name: AuRel
Age: 597
Physical Appearance: http://i31.servimg.com/u/f31/14/61/91/73/dragon11.jpg" border="0" alt="" />
Personality: AuRel is a very honorable dragon, he is father of AuRon, RuGuuard and Wistala as well as chief of the Dragons. His mate died many years ago, because of this he is very defensive of his children even though they are considered adult dragons. He is often very perceptive when faced with a question; never making his judgment before reviewing all the facts.


Nature: Lightning
Name: AuRon
Age: 222
Physical Appearance:
Personality: AuRon is a courageous young dragon, though he does have a habit of charging in first and then asking questions. Even though RuGuuard is his brother, he considers him his rival. AuRon is the Strongest of the three siblings.

Nature: Lightning
Name: Wistala
Age: 222
Physical Appearance: http://i31.servimg.com/u/f31/14/61/91/73/wistal10.jpg" border="0" alt="" />
Personality: Wistala or Tala as she prefers is very smart, often preferring to read (She taught herself to read human text and yes she prefers hardback books to paperbacks because they are easier for her to use without destroying the pages.) She is the fastest flier of the three dragon siblings almost surpassing AuRel.

Nature: Lightning
Name: RuGuuard
Age: 222
Physical Appearance: http://i31.servimg.com/u/f31/14/61/91/73/storm_11.jpg" border="0" alt="" />
Personality: RuGuuard is a ruthless dragon, obsessed with finding new power. He is the most focused of the three siblings Though his brother AuRon considers them rivals, he sees it as nothing more than a childish game and refuses to involve himself in it.


Pact-techniques:
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Physical-alterations: His skin is extremely resilient like that of a dragon’s scales while his nails are as sharp as dragon’s talons.

Sage Mode Information

Physical Appearance:
Sage Mode Techniques: (What sort of Techniques do you unlock, or are able to use exclusively in Sage Mode? Follow the template below. You may only start with two Sage Mode Techniques.)

Type: Senjutsu/Taijutsu
Nature:
Rank: S
Class: offensive/defensive
Name: Dragon’s Might
Description: After entering sage mode Felix’s fighting style is greatly altered making it resemble a varience of Southern Dragon style kung-fu.
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Because of the application of nature chakra, his attacks are given an unseen range boost so much so that a seeming missed hit can still knock back an opponent.

Limitations: This lasts as long Felix can remain in sage mode.

Duration: So far Felix can only hold his sage mode for about 20 minutes [10 posts].

Chakra Information

Nature: Earth and Fire

Specialization: Senjutsu

Jutsu

(NOTE: Each Summoning counts as a Jutsu of yours, so, choose sparingly with the amount of Summonings you'd like your character to start with.)

1.)
Type: Ninjutsu
Nature: None
Rank: D rank
Class: Supplementary
Name: Body Flicker Technique
Description: This jutsu is a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short to long distances at an almost untraceable speed. To an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported. A puff of smoke is occasionally used to disguise the user's movements. It is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily vitalise the body and move at extreme speeds. The amount of chakra required depends on the overall distance and elevation between the user and their intended destination . Shisui Uchiha was feared as "Shisui of the Body Flicker" (瞬身のシスイ, Shunshin no Shisui), likely referring to this technique.

The Body Flicker Technique has various variations among the different hidden villages, all of which involve some extra element aside from the movement itself. The extra element is usually some sort of substance used to distract the opponent, such as leaves or sand. Gaara, for instance, uses the Sand Body Flicker (砂瞬身, Suna-Shunshin), which uses sand to cover his movements. Other varieties include the Mist Body Flicker (霧瞬身, Kiri-Shunshin), Water Body Flicker (水瞬身, Mizu-Shunshin), and Leaf Body Flicker (木ノ葉瞬身, Konoha-Shunshin). The Fourth Raikage combined the Body Flicker Technique with the Lightning Release Armor which allowed him to dodge even Amaterasu in a split second.

Limitations: 1 post 2 cooldown

2.)
Type: Ninjutsu
Nature: None
Rank: B rank
Class: Supplementary
Name: Shadow Clone Technique
Description: Similar to the Clone Technique, this jutsu creates clones of the user. But unlike the Clone Technique, these clones are actual copies, not illusions. The user's chakra is evenly distributed among every clone, giving each clone an equal fraction of the user's overall power. The clones are capable of performing jutsu on their own and can even bleed, but will usually disperse after one or two solid blows. They can also disperse on their own. The clones will be created in roughly the same condition as the original. Limitations: 5 clones, 3 posts use with a 5 post cooldown


3.)
Type: Taijutsu
Nature: none
Rank: C rank
Class: offensive
Name: Lion Combo
Description: This jutsu is a variant of Rock Lee's Front Lotus, which Sasuke develops after using his Sharingan to copy the first part of the move. Because Lee wasn't given the chance to finish the attack, Sasuke makes his own ending to it. Like Lee, Sasuke gets to the point where he does Shadow of the Dancing Leaf to get behind an airborne opponent. He then delivers a series a of blows that differ between use. All variations end with the opponent being thrown to the ground and kicked in the chest.
Limitations: 1 post set up 1 post use and a 3 post cooldown


4.)
Type: Taijutsu
Nature: none
Rank: C rank
Class: Supplementary
Name: Shadow of the Dancing Leaf
Description: A technique where one follows the opponent, closely matching their body's movement, just like a leaf that dances in the air is followed by its shadow. The technique begins with a swift upper kick that will launch their target into the air. It is mainly used to position an opponent into a vulnerable aerial position. This move by itself is harmless, but it is usable as a stepping stone for a great many powerful jutsu like Front Lotus and the Lion Combo. That said, it also has a rather high degree of difficulty.
Limitations: 1 post use 2 post cooldown

5.)
Type: Ninjutsu
Nature: None
Rank: A rank
Class: offensive
Name: Rasengan
Description: The Rasengan is a powerful A-Rank technique invented by the Fourth Hokage, Minato Namikaze. After spending three years of developing it, however, he never saw the Rasengan completed, having never achieved the desired results before he died.

Minato's idea for the Rasengan was to take the Shape Transformation of his chakra to the "highest possible point" and then combine it with his chakra's nature affinity, creating a jutsu that did not need the aid of time-consuming hand seals to control. He died before he could accomplish this, but on shape manipulation alone, the Rasengan is still a very useful, powerful, and difficult jutsu to learn and master
Limitations: 1 post duration 2 post cooldown

6.)
Type: Ninjustsu
Nature: None
Rank: E rank
Class: defensive
Name: Substitution Justu
Description: This jutsu lets the user quickly switch places with another nearby object, such as a plant (normally a section of a log), an animal, or even another person within reach using the Body Flicker Technique, the moment an attack hits. This creates an optical illusion, making the enemy think the attack was successful. The user can then use this confusion to escape or launch a counter-attack. Exploding tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise.
Limitations: 1 post use 2 post cooldown

7.)
Type: Ninjutsu
Nature: None
Rank: A rank
Class: offensive/defensive
Name: Multiple Shadow Clone Technique
Description: This jutsu is basically a massive version of the Shadow Clone Technique. Instead of a few clones, it creates a few hundred clones (or a number of equal grandeur). This is considered a forbidden jutsu, because it can potentially be dangerous to the person performing it, seeing as how all of the clones are given an equal amount of chakra directly from the user. Naruto learned the technique from the scroll of forbidden seals written by the First Hokage.

Few people are able to use this technique effectively, due to the large amount of chakra it consumes. However, this weakness is not an issue to Naruto, due to his massive chakra reserves. Having such reserves allows him to create hundreds of clones while maintaining a decent supply of chakra in each one. This technique is also used by Naruto to train quickly, since all the clones share their experiences with Naruto, but it causes extreme fatigue with repeated use. In the dub, Naruto does not appear to distinguish between the Multiple and regular variations of the technique, and often simply says "Shadow Clone Technique" regardless of how many clones he uses.

Limitations: 5 post with a 8 post cooldown

8.)
Type: Ninjutsu
Nature: Fire
Rank: B rank
Class: offensive/supplementary
Name: Fire Release: Great Dragon Fire Technique
Description: The user compresses a large amount of chakra built up inside their body and changes its shape into a dragon-shaped fireball. The user then skillfully manipulates that great fire, and attacks their opponent. Even outside of the attack range, its power and reliability are stressed. The flames have a high temperature, as they can create an updraught which in turn can give rise to thunder clouds. A master of this technique can fire off several flames in succession. Anyone caught in the technique could potentially be reduced to ashes.
Limitations: 1 post set up 1 post use 6 post cooldown

9.)
Type: Ninjutsu
Nature: Fire
Rank: B Rank
Class: offensive
Name: Fire Release: Fire Dragon Flame Missile
Description: The user kneads chakra into flames, which are then manipulated into a genuine-looking, dragon. Since the art of having the flames obey the user's will is outrageously difficult, its mastery is restricted to a limited number of skillful shinobi . The spat out flames are divided to launch a left side, right side, and frontal assault in all three directions at once, turning the enemy into ash in a matter of seconds.
Limitations: 1 post set up 1 post use and 3 cooldown

10.)
Type: Ninjutsu
Nature: Earth
Rank: C rank
Class: Offensive
Name: Earth Release: Tearing Earth Turning Palm
Description: This technique causes the ground surrounding the enemy to spiral inwards on itself, burying them alive or crushing them. This technique is much more damaging if used in rocky mountainous areas, or inside a cave.
Limitations: 1 post duration with a 3 post cooldown

11.)
Type: Ninjutsu
Nature: Earth
Rank: B rank
Class: Offensive, Supplementary
Name: Earth Release Barrier: Earth Prison Dome of Magnificent Nothingness
Description: This jutsu traps the victims inside a self-repairing dome of earth which is almost instantaneously able to reform, even after Kiba hit it with his Piercing Fang. Jirōbō was able to absorb the chakra of anyone trapped inside, something he enjoyed greatly. However, Jirōbō's chakra was distributed throughout the dome, but not equally. Near the back (relative to him), his chakra was much weaker, making the dome weaker in that spot.
Limitations: 5 post duration with a 10 post cooldown.

12.)
Type: Ninjutsu
Nature: Earth
Rank: A
Class: Offensive
Name: Earth Release: Swamp of the Underworld
Description: By changing the surface of an object (ground, ceiling, wall, etc.) beneath an enemy (relative to them) into mud and creating a swamp, the user can sink his enemy into the mud. The adhesive, chakra-infused mud ensnares the enemy's body, making it almost impossible to recover one's strength and escape from there. The size and depth of the created swamp depends on the user's skill and the amount of chakra used, but if the user is an expert in this technique, it will always be possible to make a fair-sized swamp which is extremely effective against a great number of enemies or having to face gigantic creatures.[2] The technique can also be used on a smaller scale to trap individual foes.
Limitations: 6 post duration with a 10 post cooldown

13.)
Type: Ninjutsu
Nature: Earth
Rank: Unknown
Class: supplementary
Name: Earth Release: Sticky Earth Drop
Description: The user creates an opening in the sky, which drips down onto the opponent a large amount of mud, covering them. It's followed by Lightning Release: Sixteen Pillar Bind to create a giant oven around the opponent and Fire Release: Fired Pottery Technique to ignite the oven, hardening the mud and immobilizing the enemy.
Limitations: 3 posts with a 4 post cooldown

14.)
Type: Ninjutsu
Nature:Fire
Rank: Unknown
Class: Offensive
Name: Fire Release: Fired Pottery Technique
Description: The user creates powerful flames inside the giant oven created by the Lightning Release: Sixteen Pillar Bind, cooking the opponent until they are burned. It's used together with Earth Release: Sticky Earth Drop to harden the mud covering the enemy's body and subsequently immobilizing them.
Limitations: Lasts 1 post with a two post cooldown.

15.)
Type: Summon
Nature: (What is the chakra nature of this technique? If there even is one.)
Rank: S Rank
Class: supplementary
Name: Summoning (AuRel)
Description: This Summons AuRel chief and sage of the Celestial Dragons. He appears in a cloud of smoke.
Limitations: 10 posts duration with a 15 post cooldown after dispersal.

16.)
Type: Summon
Nature:
Rank: B rank
Class: supplementary
Name: Summoning (AuRon)
Description: This summons AuRon one of the three sibling of the Celestial Dragons. He appears in a cloud of smoke.
Limitations: 7 post duration with a 6 post cooldown after dispersal

17.)
Type: Summon
Nature:
Rank: B rank
Class: supplementary
Name: Summoning (Wistala)
Description: This summons Wistala one of the three sibling of the Celestial Dragons. She appears in a cloud of smoke.
Limitations: 7 post duration with a 6 post cooldown after dispersal

18.)
Type: Summon
Nature:
Rank: B rank
Class: supplementary
Name: Summoning (RuGuuard)
Description: This summons RuGuuard one of the three sibling of the Celestial Dragons. He appears in a cloud of smoke.
Limitations: 7 post duration with a 6 post cooldown after dispersal

Additional Jutsu

(Any jutsu that you create, or that your character has learned will be moved here. This only applies to those jutsu you've created, or learned AFTER your character application was approved. Only Administrators have the power to add the Jutsu you've created, or that you've learned to this section of the character app. You will leave this portion of the app. blank to start with.)

Arsenal

Ninja Tools: [pouch is worn on the back of his belt under his jacket and contains the following]

  • x15 kunai
  • x10 shuriken
  • x4 coils of ninja wire (one coil is six feet of wire)
  • x5 explosive tags
  • x1 small scrolls with 2 windmill shuriken sealed inside
  • His former headband, AuRel instructed him to remove it once he entered into sage hood so he now carries it as nothing more than a memento of his time he spent with his teammates.


Primary Weapon: The Dragon’s sword

Secondary Weapon: Dragon’s Claw


Biography & RP-Sample

Biography: Felix was born in the Kohonagakure to a loving family, though his mother and father were not ninja. From the age of five Felix knew exactly what he wanted to do; his dream was to become a ninja and protect his home from any who tried to destroy it. His Father tried to dissuade him at first claiming it was too dangerous to be a ninja and that to really protect the village he should become an architect, that it was needed more and that it would be safer than gallivanting off on missions where there was no promise if he would come back. Seeing that his argument would not work with his son, Felix’s father finally agreed to let him join the ninja academy.

At age 6 Felix enrolled in the ninja academy, at first he had problems not being able to grasp the concept of chakra shaping. It wasn’t until 2 years later when he mastered the Substitution jutsu that everything clicked and fell into place. From that point on Felix excelled at most ninjutsu and taijutsu, though even his instructors noted that he would never be able to do much in the art on genjutsu. Felix quickly advanced through the training courses of the academy to earn himself the rank of Genin.

It was a year later after 10 D rank missions and 6 C rank missions on his record that he and his squad were recommended for the chunin exam. It was difficult for the Felix, but it was his shear force of will that saw him make chunin that year.

5 years after Felix earned his chunin rank and it was his first mission in which he was a team leader. He was to escort a rich trader to the Getsugakure. Though this was only a C ranked mission, it was discovered that this trader was in actuality was a missing-nin from the Getsugakure that intended to use escort as a shield and cover so that he could get close enough to the village leader for an assassination.

It was on this mission that Felix saw the death of his two teammates, trying to avenge them Felix nearly succeeded in killing the trader. But at the last minute he hesitated and with that he felt the dagger flow smoothly between his own ribs. All went dark for Felix that night as he blacked out.

It was much later that a wander who saw the destruction happened upon Felix’s unconscious body, with a gentle and practiced hand he dressed Felix’s wounds and carried him to the fabled cave of AuRel. Laying his body at the mouth of the cave the stranger spoke not to Felix but, to the mouth of the cave. “I leave this boy in your hands, I may not be able to reach your impossible goal, but from the destruction that surrounded this boy he may be able to.” And with that said the wander faded off back to what he did so well.

When Felix awoke two days later his vision was still a blur, his body still in excruciating pain. From his left Felix heard a female voice speak softly, “There is no need to pretend you are still unconscious, you are safe here.” Opening his eyes he was shocked to see a green dragon lying at the mouth of cave, though every nerve in his body wanted to run it couldn’t move.

“Please there is no need to be afraid I am Wistala, but please just call me Tala. My father gave me orders to keep watch over you for when you awoke.” He voice rang like a bell which Felix took as odd given her appearance.

“Wait, how did I get here? What happened to me? How are you talking to me?” Felix blurted out in rapid fire succession.

Wistala turned her head so that her two crimson eyes stared at him, “You were brought here, by one we only know as the wanderer, he is the only human that knows the location of our home. As to what happened to you we have no idea, but judging from your wounds you are lucky to be alive who ever stabbed you missed your heart and lung. You had a guardian angel looking after you that night.” Turning Wistala started to leave but looked back, “If you are feeling well enough, it might be better if you come with me.”

Standing Felix grimaced as a pain shot up his left side; slowly he made his way towards the mouth of the cave. As he made his way to Wistala he leaned against her side, “I am sorry but I may have to lean on you for support Wistala.”

Slowly they made their way up through the cave, when they finally reached the top it was reviled that they were actually on top of a mountain. In front of him two other dragons about the same size as Wistala or a small horse, were fighting tooth and claw. Wistala growled at the two as her voice rang with disappointment “AuRon, RuGuuard stop it, our guest is awake, and this is no way to act. You both are adult dragons and you need to behave as such.” After that the two dragons stopped immediately and walked to a raised platform lying down on either side of it.

Sitting atop the platform was massive red dragon his eyes were staring straight at Felix strong and unwavering his voice rang strong as he spoke. “It is good to see you awake little one, when I first saw your wounds I thought you would surely die, but after three weeks of slipping in and out of consciousness you have proven me wrong.” The red dragon snaked his head forward so that one of his massive eyes was only inches from him so that Felix could see his reflection. “Tell me boy what is your name?”

Felix fought to find his voice, after a few moments finally he managed to choke out his name and what had happened to him and his teammates.

“Well Felix, I am AuRel and the two off to the sides are my sons AuRon and RuGuuard; you already met my daughter Tala. I can see from your injuries that you have suffered greatly, after the loss of your teammates and the failure of your mission I have one question for you. Why after all of it do you keep fighting?” AuRel voice rang with the sincerity of the question.

“Because I became a ninja to protect my home and my friends, but I failed at that after I let my teammates die.” Felix hung his head low disappointed with himself “You should of just let me die, a ninja who can’t protect is barely a ninja at all.”

AuRel chuckled “I have a better idea, if you are willing to pay the price I can teach you a technique that few have ever mastered.”

“I will pay any price in order to protect my home.” Felix said without a moment’s hesitation.

“You will have to break all ties to your family, they will see your increase in power as a weapon to be used as a weapon that they can manipulate themselves.” AuRel withdrew back to his platform as he awaited Felix’s answer.

Felix was silent for a moment thinking it over for the price was high, “I…I will do it...if it will help me keep my promise to protect I will do it.”

With that AuRel set his focus on teaching Felix many new things over the course of years it was ten years before AuRel announced to Felix that he had learned all that he could from being taught by any mortal teacher and that time was the only teacher that could show him more. Under the light of the stars and in the presence of the three siblings AuRel named Felix the Dragon Sage.

It was then that AuRel sent Felix back to world of mortals with only a few words for guidance. “When you reach the end, I find it useful to start back at the beginning. Remember as a sage you often be sought for in times of crisis, this is the curse for once such as you. You do not shoulder this responsibility alone for remember we are always he for you to call upon in times of need.”

RP-Sample:

Standing at the base of the Celestial mountain, Felix looked to the east as the sun started to rise over the valley. Start back at the beginning, is he saying I should return home? Where is home; it has been ten years since I was last in the leaf village, the Kage likely thinks I am dead. These mountains are my home now, but I must strike out on my own. I have to keep training to perfect myself so that when the time comes I can protect the ones I care about.

Felix patted the sword that sat on his hip as he spoke to the wind. “I have completed my training and I made a promise a long time ago to protect my home. I can do that now, but I have two homes that I have to protect.” Turning back he stared up trying helplessly to see through the clouds that surrounded the many peaks of the Celestial mountain. “I leave this one in good hands…” With that he started off on the journey he knew would eventually lead him home to the hidden leaf. It will be a long journey, but I will see the gates of the Kohona before the end of the week…even if have to crawl through the gates. Felix grinned as he planned to turn a two week journey into one.




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Rank: Sage (S)

PostSubject: Re: Felix Pyre-Sage   Mon Jul 19, 2010 9:06 am

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PostSubject: Re: Felix Pyre-Sage   Mon Jul 19, 2010 2:46 pm

1) Your AuRel summoning should have at least a 8-10 post cooldown.

2) The rest of your summonings should have at least a 6-8 post cooldown.

3) Your Multi Shadow Clone jutsu should have at least a 10 post cooldown.

4) For your RP-sample, we need your character's RP-sample, not a character from another site. It needs to be 10-12 sentences long if/when applying for Sage position.

Note, there is someone else on this Site who is applying for Sage position, I will talk to Staff about a waiting period, giving Seaas Hyuga somewhat of a chance to compete for this position. At most, the waiting period will be for the rest of the day, but, I'm unsure for now.

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PostSubject: Re: Felix Pyre-Sage   Mon Jul 19, 2010 3:21 pm

Fixed I also added one thing to his arsenal, it is minor but I still think it needed to be there.
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PostSubject: Re: Felix Pyre-Sage   Mon Jul 19, 2010 3:28 pm

1) AuRel needs a 15 post cooldown, if you plan on having him out for 10 posts. If not, he needs at least a 10 post cooldown.

2) Your other summonings need a 6-8 post cooldown.

3) Your multi shadow clone jutsu needs at least an 8-10 post cooldown.

I don't see these changes on your application. Please be sure to take care of them.

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PostSubject: Re: Felix Pyre-Sage   Mon Jul 19, 2010 4:11 pm

hmmm fixed....I dont know what happened last time with the jutsu...but my comp has been screwy all day...
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PostSubject: Re: Felix Pyre-Sage   Tue Jul 20, 2010 11:01 am

Alright, approved. Smile

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