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Name: Rina
Affiliation: Iwagakure
Rank: ANBU

PostSubject: Rina Angel of Death DONE!   Thu Jul 15, 2010 8:17 pm

Personal Information

Birthdate: Feb. 19


Birthsign: Pisces

Name: Rina

Nickname: Deaths Angel

Personality: ] Rina is a very complex individual, her way of thinking is some what odd along with the fact she as one could say ahs two souls due to her personality. Normally she keeps to herself, not wanting any one to ever get close to her due to the fact she was brought up thinking she was nothing more than a monster. In a way Rina has a hatred for anyone who is not her….simply because in her mind they have an easy life…

To those she is not close to this ninja gives them the cold shoulder, her eyes normally never meet there’s and if they do they become locked in a dark glare…she hates strangers. If Rina sees someone staring at her she tends to brush it off, but if they don’t stop after a moment or so she will make sure they stop……either using a stern word or two, a glare or even a slash across the face.

Yet there is a sweet, and longing in her heart…she wants nothing more than to be accepted by her fellow ninja, she longs for companionship…she longs for a family that truly loves her…one that does not toss her aside like she is nothing more then a piece of trash take up space and wasting oxygen that could be breathed by those who deserve it.

TO thos that do except her and take the time be brake past her hard shell she is very sweet, she loves those people with all her heart….RIna will die to protect to what she holds close……she lets the few people who care see her smile….when she smiles its like she never suffered…like she was normal…like she does not lust blood.
In truth she is just lonely and sad…


Likes: 1. Rina loves to swim, she like the feeling of the water brushing her skin…the weightless feeling.

Reading, to Rina reading is constant learning…..to her knowledge is key to winning a fight…she also finds it easier to come up with her jutsus that way.

Writing, it is the way she keeps track of every think that is happening along with the formulas she uses to create her Poisons and what not.

Flowers just because they are very elegant

Singing just because she has the voice of an angel.

Art, because it is her way of life.


Dislikes: To many to list

Physical Information

Gender: Female

Age: 18

Height: 5 foot

Weight: (In lbs - this is optional.)

Hair Color: Light brown.

Eye Color:


General Appearance: ]

Rina has a bit of a spunky out look to her, one could say it is quite fitting to her very rough and tragic life story. Thou having a hard face at times she has a bit of a cute side one could say, her eyes are clearly not of the normal, on a deep aqua color matching the sky on a warm summer day, the other as green as the grass that grows in the meadows.

Rinas hair is long, it flows down to her lower back when not pinned up of cores, her reason for having her hair so long is somewhat of a mystery, after all it can be a very ideal weakness…….she would most likely kill anyone who even dared to even attempt to cut it. Her bands go down to her shoulders at there longest point, but they tend to be angled so they fall over sections of her face from covering one of her eyes.

Her frame is slender and looks fragile but in fact she is somewhat toned…but not to the point she looks like she lifts a lot every day. Her legs are long making her a very fast running, not to mention they are very strong, her arms are rather thin but, they help her get the job done.

She is very short for her age tho only standing 5 foot.

Normally Rina sticks with dark colors like black purple or blood red,her eyes day outfit is her black clock black ninja shoes her short black shorts and a purple or red tank top, once and a while a tub top depending on how she feels. Her nails are painted her shirt color, if she has time she while draw little designees on them.

Rinas no girly girl but she likes her black chocker with her silver moon on it, and her star anklet , she also has her silver studded belt…..she stole it from her friend once and she never gave it back to him.. and lastly her silver studded wrist bands.

Lastly she has Angel wings tatooed on her back


Clan Information

Clan: (What Clan does your character come from, if any?)

Kekke Genkai/Hiden: (What is your Clan's Kekke Genkai, or Hiden (hidden technique)? You cannot create your own Kekkei Genkai.)

Head of the Household: (Who is the Head of the Household in your Clan if you're a part of one?)

Social Information

Family: Yuji mom
Shino:dad
Ken:brother

Friends: Yuki Dead
Yoshiko
Garovo

Ninja Status

Affiliation: Iwa

Ninja Registration: 893845
Rank: ANBU

Class: (A-rank for ANBU.)

Academy Graduation Age: 9

Chunin Promotion Age: 12

Chakra Information

Nature: Lightning,Earth

Specialization: Ninjutsu
Jutsu

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Additional Jutsu

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Arsenal

Ninja Tools: Bomb tags-25
Shuriken-15

Primary Weapon: Twin swords
Secondary Weapon: Metal claws

Biography & RP-Sample

Biography: As a young childe Rina was enrolled in the academy located in the village hidden in the stone. She was an outcast and had no friends; every one treated her like she should have not been alive. But in a way the whole village treated her that way, from banding her from shops, yelling at her for just walking by, or even speaking to them. Her life was a living hell, a few times she had thought of running away but she knew she could not fend for her self and how big the world was compared to her. In truth she was very small for her age, she thought it might have been because she was born weeks before her dew date and it’s a wonder she even survived.

As her academy days slowly drove on she was forced into a privet class because she was a “distraction” to the other students. She was the only one in this class; her teacher went by the name of Yuki-san. He was a tall young man around the age of twenty-five or so, he had long as he said blond but to Rina it looked more along the lines of silver, his Eyes where a pale gray. As time went on he realized Rina was not what every one said she was: Evil, demonic, a mistake and so forth. He slowly started to take her with him more then just at school, to him she needed a friend and so that’s what he became.

With the help of Yuki-san Garovo and Yoshiko Rina passed the academy with flying colors. But just from what Yuki said to others did not change there out look of her.

Genin:

Rinas genin years where much like her Academy days but with much more fear forced with in her. Her squad was always against her even her sensei, not that it mattered to Rina if they liked her or not as long as Yuki-San was there for her at the end of the day she was happy. Her day when like this train with team, go see Yuki-san, go home and get tortured by hateful family. The reason she was hated was not her fault it was Tamashii the evil, demonic chakra lock with in her. That was the reason every one hated her because they thought she would end up just like him.

Nothing really happened the years that came by it was the same rotten every day, over and over and over and over and over for two full years.

Chuunin;

Again it was the same thing as Rinas previous years but both her team mates where killed in the exams so she was stuck with new teammates. Both worse then her pervious ones if that was even possible.

Missions got harder and so did her life, people would not even look at her any more and every night she would fall asleep crying her eyes out. Not even Yuki had time for her, this almost drove her to the point of insanity and she would lose her temper and brake things in her house.

The week of the Jounin exams Yuki came up to her and told her why he had not been able to be around her for those long years. She was told that he was forced to stay away for they thought she was going to corrupt him. For that week he helped her train and with his help she made it to the next step.

ANbu

Rinas life was a lot easier now for she did not have any ninja bothering her and she had moved out of her home and to the other side of there village where not as many ninja lived. It was heaven, on one was around to shun or irritate her like in her younger years.


RP-Sample: Rina sat crossed legged on her desk as she waited for Yunji to begin her tail of her life…she was ready for her ruddily sounding words which she surprisingly understood quite well. First she started to speak of her mother , he mother did not speak like she did and her father was completely normal as she said….he saying this only added to RIna curiosity…Yunji was like a puzzle with many missing pices and slowly but surely they have been falling into place but there were still many pieces missing…the part about her clan had many missing pieces.
“So… Yunjis parents were relatively normal…..but she is far from that I wonder why.” She pondered resting her chin in her hand and taping it slightly as if it would bring her the answer.

Yunjis words began to disturb Rina….cannibalism was not something she found very appetizing in fact she found it very disturbing. “They eat people” Rina muttered mostly to herself. As she continued her eyes narrowed…..they just disappeared? That sounded a bit odd to Rina. “well Yunji-Chan if youd like I could help u look for them?...i have a good nose” she stated rather sadly…they loved her and Yunji did not deserve this.

Once again Yunji moved onto another topic this one was a bit odd but Rina did not comment on it…….in a way RIna was somehow the same she could not do a mission without her fingerless gloves…but there was a reason behind that …with her chakra being so hot long periods of concentration tend to take their toll on Rinas black chakra engulfed hands. Her eyes stayed on Yunji….she was very odd indeed yet very friendly.

Then things started to get real crazy Yunji started to laugh like she was compliably insane…RIna just sat there….tragedy tended to do that to people….even she herself was not completely sane and she was not going to try and deny that for even a minute. And it was not long before she pointed that out….her eyes narrowed and she nodded “my friend I will not deny that…….” She muttered

Flashback*
“YUKI-KUN!!!!” RIna screamed into her pillow sobbing her body quivered as she continued to cry and cry….she had been like that for nearly a week non stop crying…..Care rested a paw on her back as she laid on her bed weeping for Yuki…..he had been murdered …for what to save the soul of an already condemned Rina……she had nothing now…she was alone…….she was completely alone……Sure care was there and Ken was just down the hall…but no one would ever be able to fix the big piece of her heart that was broken.

She heard Care sigh as he nuzzled the side of her face in attempt to comfort her…but there was not comfort…she only wanted Yuki no one else just Yuki…a genital hand moved across her cheek she did not bother to look it was Ketsu…..he was worried for her as well…she had not touched food for a week and they had to hold her down to get her to drink……he could not help but to want to scoop RIna up and hold her in his arms…..but care and him both knew that she would never allow such contact between them . shifting his weight for a moment he left the room.

Not long after Ken walked in he had a plan to make Rina feel better…..revenge…being young Rina could easily be corrupted by her older brother…but then again she wanted to commit murder any way. Draging RIna out of her bed Ken led her to a empty room with nothing more than A man strapped to the wall his eye black from a fight…….the stench of Iwa was all over him….and somewhere deep within his skin the smell of Yukis blood…….Instantly RInas fangs grew sharper and longer her eyes narrowed as he nails contracted into razor sharp claws…….she wanted to kill she wanted him to feel her pain…she wanted revenge.

Ken nodded his head and Rina was in front of him in an instant screaming and yelling at him as she riped her claws threw his shirt……”YOU WILL DIE” she snarled her claw pressing deep into his chest…she drug it down then clawed his face…..with both hands she pried it open…she growled “would u like to know what you “ she grabbed his hear “did to my heart” the man screamed in agony as she riped it out and threw it at his face.
End*

By the time RIna came back to earth Yunji was ranting, things were about to get ugly…out of nowhere Rina was seized by yunji…chakra was focused into her hand ready to shove against yunji if she did something she would later regret….she was going crazy….to Rina it was clear she did not remember who she was talking to… “YUNJI SNAP OUT OF IT” Rina barked her jaw tight….she was worried.

Suddenly she was let go and yunji was on the floor crying, using her better judgment she slid down next to her friend and hugged her gently and said in a very soft tone. “We arnt laughing because the world is cold and unfair…it takes the people we love and people in this world just don’t know what that have nor do they have any comen sence any more….at one point there was piece…..at a few points the nations worked together to stop an evil organization…now we all are separated by hate,”[/center]


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PostSubject: Re: Rina Angel of Death DONE!   Thu Jul 15, 2010 11:15 pm

Alright, there are some things im going to have to ask you to edit:

1. Your Carbon Rain Poison Replacement is way too GM I'm going to have to ask you to remove it and find another Jutsu to replace it with.

2. bunshin no Jutsu- choose from 1-15 clones, and please give us a duration for the technique.

3. Earth Release: Earth Flow Divide- please state a range, for how far the technique can stretch towards. By Instant im guessing you mean the Jutsu can only be used once and has a 4 post cooldown.

4. Shichuu Shibari - Four Pillar Binding- need a limit (how many times it can be used), short duration and high cooldown as it is very powerful. The pillars will also need to take longer to appear.

5. lightning dragon- needs a limit and cooldown.

6. Lightning tornado- needs a limit, duration, and cooldown.

7. Lightning Release: Lightning Burial- this jutsu is way too similiar to the Sabaku Clans (custom clan that specializes in Sand jutsu) Sand burial, please change this.

Once these changes are made I will take a second look.

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PostSubject: Re: Rina Angel of Death DONE!   Fri Jul 16, 2010 3:40 pm



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7. Lightning Release: Lightning Burial- this jutsu is way too similiar to the Sabaku Clans (custom clan that specializes in Sand jutsu) Sand burial, please change this.


Type: ninjutsu
Nature: lightning
Rank: B
Class: offensive,
Name: (Raiton: Ikazuchi no Utage) - Lightning Release: Lightning Burial ~ Banquet of Lightning
Description: The user brings their hands together and an electrical energy will begin to crackle around them. They will then slam their hands to the ground to send an electric current racing through the earth. When the current approaches its target, it can split into multiple tendrils to attack separate targets individually


How does that have anythign to do with sand burial

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PostSubject: Re: Rina Angel of Death DONE!   Fri Jul 16, 2010 6:20 pm

Hmmm.... I see no problem with this app if no one disagrees


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PostSubject: Re: Rina Angel of Death DONE!   Fri Jul 16, 2010 10:25 pm

1. bunshin no Jutsu- choose from 1-15 clones, and please give us a limit for how long the clones last in a thread.

2. The way you use Lightning Release: Lightning Burial is exactly how Gaara uses Sand Burial except your using lightning to replace the sand, we have a rule that states no member can have a similiar technique to an already existing jutsu. Kiri no Kami and myself both agree this must be changed.

Once these changes are made I will take a third look.

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PostSubject: Re: Rina Angel of Death DONE!   Sat Jul 17, 2010 9:28 am

Id like to point out that Lightning Release: Lightning Burial is a CON jutsu.
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PostSubject: Re: Rina Angel of Death DONE!   Sat Jul 17, 2010 12:37 pm

1) Lightning Release: Lightning Burial is not a canon jutsu, the name allowed us to assume you were referring to a Lightning version of Sand Burial - which is not canon. There is a technique called, Lightning Burial: Banquet of Lightning, which is a Kenjutsu, and differs entirely from Sand Burial.

Please correct accordingly - I'm unsure if you've followed up on Karasu's corrections, but if you haven't, please do so.

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PostSubject: Re: Rina Angel of Death DONE!   Sat Jul 17, 2010 1:26 pm

-.- im not trying to be a pain....but

THIS JUTSU IS NOTHING LIKE THE SAND JUTSu.

Sure maybe the casting is some what the same but really now.

The user brings their hands together and an electrical energy will begin to crackle around them. They will then slam their hands to the ground to send an electric current racing through the earth. When the current approaches its target, it can split into multiple tendrils to attack separate targets individually.

how that have anything to do with that V

Gokusamaisou is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by the Sand ninja Gaara. Using his ability to manipulate sand, Gaara will loosen the ground below his target and cause them to sink deep within the earth. By being imprisoned at this depth, the pressure will completely limit their ability to move.
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PostSubject: Re: Rina Angel of Death DONE!   Sat Jul 17, 2010 1:35 pm

Hold on...

Didn't you say that this technique was a canon jutsu? Neutral

I figured you were comparing it to Sand Burial.

Anyways, if you've made this Jutsu up, and simply gave it the name Lightning Burial, then I apologize for this whole mix-up.

If this is a canon jutsu however, please send the link so I can be sure how it's done, and what it looks like.

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PostSubject: Re: Rina Angel of Death DONE!   Sat Jul 17, 2010 1:50 pm

Alright, now that that's all cleared up.

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