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Kyoichi Shingen



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Character sheet
Name: Kyoichi Shingen
Affiliation: Kirigakure
Rank: Genin

PostSubject: Shingen, Kyoichi    Thu Jul 15, 2010 1:18 pm

Personal Information

Birthdate: October 25

Birthsign: Scorpio

Name: Kyoichi Shingen

Nickname: Kyo, Kyoichi-Kohai

Personality: Kyoichi is calm, collected and sometimes lazy when he's not around his friends or his uncle, and without someone to push him has a hard time doing anything. Though, when he is around people, he often pushes his mind, body and life to the limit. He can be very headstrong and stubborn on topics such as missions and getting stronger, or perhaps beating an opponent.

Around his uncle, he shows his intelligence much more than he usually does and can be seen either trying to impress him or to prove something to him. His opinion, views and goals in life are based off of his uncles.

Likes: Relaxing, Reading, Oji-san

Dislikes: Working

Physical Information

Gender: Male

Age: 12

Height: 5'5"

Weight: 113 lbs.

Hair Color: Bright White

Eye Color: Ocean sparkling blue

General Appearance:

Clan Information

Clan: ----------

Kekke Genkai/Hiden: Bone manipulation - Kyoichi can control his bones, sharpen his bones with chakra and even take them out of his body to use as weapons and regrow them instantly with massive amounts of chakra. But, at his current level, he can only use bones that are in his feet and hands and if he tries to use something like his femur or forearm bones, he might not have enough chakra to completely regrow them back.

Head of the Household: -----------------

Social Information

Family:

Matsuda Shingen - Uncle

Itaru Shingen - Father (Deceased)

Friends: ----

Ninja Status

Affiliation: Kirigakure

Ninja Registration: 329475

Rank: Genin

Class: D-rank

Academy Graduation Age: 12

Chakra Information

Nature: Water

Specialization: None

Jutsu

1.)
Type: Ninjutsu
Nature: -
Rank: D-rank
Class: Offensive, Defensive
Name: Bone Daggers
Description: Kyoichi pushes out his finger bones, locks up the joints so they can't move and sharpens the end of the bones to be dagger like. He can make up to five at a time, from one hand. They are about 6" to 10", depending on the finger. They are as strong as normal bones, and can be broken with someone punching or kicking them, though, this can be seen as an advantage if Kyoichi stabs someone with the dagger and the bone shatters inside of the wound.
Limitations:
Duration: Nine (9) posts, or until broken.
Cool down: 5 posts
Limitations: Can be used twice (2) a topic.

2.)
Type: Ninjutsu
Nature: -
Rank: C-rank
Class: Defensive
Name: Bone restoration
Description: Kyoichi can heal bones that are broken or shattered inside of the body, by simply focusing his chakra to his bones. It takes a good amount of chakra to do, and can leave Kyoichi exhausted afterward.
Limitations:
Time to heal: 2 posts, 3 if bone is shattered
Cool down: Once per topic


3.)
Type: Taijutsu
Nature: -
Rank: D-rank
Class: Offensive
Name: Bone Knuckles
Description: Kyoichi sprouts his knuckles out, and uses chakra to sharpen them to the point of being able to pierce skin. He can only do this to one hand at a time and usually switches hands as to not stress the new grown bones. Kyoichi has to regrow his knuckles, and they are not chakra reinforced, so they are not very hard to break. But, it could be used as an advantage, if Kyoichi punches someone, breaks the skin and leaves bone fragments inside of the wound.
Limitations:
Duration: Nine (9) posts, or until broken.
Cool Down: Five (5) posts
Limitations: Can be used twice (2) per topic.


4.)
Type: Ninjutsu
Nature: -
Rank: D-rank
Class: Offensive
Name: Biter
Description: Kyoichi can reinforce his teeth with chakra, as they are bones, and can make then sharper, easier to penetrate things such as bones and steel. Though, the teeth can be damaged, then Kyoichi would be forced to heal them.
Limitations:
Duration: Four (4) posts
Cool down: Six (6) posts

5.)
Type: Ninjutsu
Nature: -
Rank: C-ranked
Class: Offensive
Name: Teeth bullets
Description: Kyoichi grows his canine teeth to be twice as long and extremely sharp, and removes them from his gums, and can then spit them with the help of chakra at a fast speed. He then takes two posts to remake the teeth, as they are much smaller in contrast to his other bones and can be remade much easier.
Limitations:
Cool down: Four (4) posts


6.)
Type: Ninjutsu
Nature: -
Rank: E-rank
Class: -
Name: Clone Technique
Description: This technique creates intangible copies of the user. The clones are simply illusions and will dissipate when they come into contact with something. The illusions can be seen through by the Byakugan and the Sharingan. A person with normal eyes can also distinguish the clones from the original, since the clones will not disrupt the area around themselves with their movement (won't kick up dust, crush grass, etc.).
Limitations:

7.)
Type: Ninjutsu
Nature: -
Rank: D-rank
Class: Defensive
Name: Body Replacement Technique
Description: This jutsu lets the user quickly switch places with another nearby object, such as a plant (normally a section of a log), an animal, or even another person within reach using the Body Flicker Technique, the moment an attack hits. This creates an optical illusion, making the enemy think the attack was successful. The user can then use this confusion to escape or launch a counter-attack. Exploding tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise.

The anime has a number of other objects being used for this jutsu, such as a boulder, mud, a scarecrow, and even a large rolled-up carpet. These items are usually nowhere in sight, suggesting that they are merely gags meant to lighten up the situation and not an actual part of the jutsu. Additionally, the normal practice of switching places with a section of log is done in several places that have no such thing anywhere nearby.
Limitations:


8.)
Type: Ninjutsu
Nature: -
Rank: E-rank
Class: -
Name: Transformation Technique
Description: This jutsu allows the user to transform either themselves or another object into the appearance of another person, animal, or object. This is one of the basic jutsu taught at the Konohagakure Ninja Academy, and most shinobi know this jutsu. The transformation technique is considered to be among the more difficult E-ranked techniques, since it requires constant emission of chakra while mentally maintaining the form. On top of that, the user would be, most likely, interacting with the environment. This puts much mental strain on an inexperienced ninja.
Limitations:


9.)
Type: Taijutsu
Nature: -
Rank: D-rank
Class: Offensive
Name: Secret Kick of Bone
Description: Kyoichi places several bones from his toes into the bottom of his foot and sharpens them with chakra to make them able to pierce skin, but doesn't reinforce it with chakra, so it isn't hard to break. When Kyoichi goes to kick something, the bones shoot out of his foot and pierce the target, though, Kyoichi cannot wear shoes when using this jutsu.
Limitations:
Duration: Nine (9) posts, or until broken.
Cool down: Four (4) posts

10.)
Type: Ninjutsu
Nature: -
Rank: D-rank
Class: -
Name: The Art of Bone Climbing
Description: Kyoichi sticks several bones out of his toes and fingers, clinging to whatever object he is on, allowing him to effectively climb on many surfaces. They can't last forever without dulling out, but a quick sharpening of the chakra can fix that. They can be broken off if hit with something or tries to stab a material that's too strong to pierce.
Limitations:
Duration: Ten (10) posts, unless broken
Cool down: Seven (7) posts

Additional Jutsu



Arsenal

Ninja Tools:

Bomb tags-5
Shuriken-15

Primary Weapon: None

Secondary Weapon: None

Biography & RP-Sample

Biography: The day before Itaru Shingen had gone out to fight as a shinobi, for his country, the last time he would have a chance, he had laid with his lover. When he had died, his lover mourned his death but a few months later, was graced with a gift from the gods. A son, that she had conceived the last time she saw Itaru. Though, knowing that she was unfit to be a parent, she seeked the boy's family. She had found the boys uncle, Matsuda Shingen, the current Mizukage and known as the god of the mist village.

After a quick visit to him and a brief conversation, she had given him her newborn son and had given him the option of naming him and disappeared. Matsuda, shocked that there was someone of his family that was still alive, had given him his surname and the first name Kyoichi. He had a room made out for Kyoichi in the Mizukage palace, and began raising Kyoichi as his own.

He showed promise, and with a little training with Matsuda, he was sent to the shinobi academy to be trained as a shinobi. When Kyoichi had asked Matsuda for assistance in his training, he had replied that he wanted Kyoichi to succeed without the help of family members. Kyoichi, not understanding what Matsuda meant, took it the wrong way. He then began constantly trying to impress his uncle, and using it as a drive for his studies.

It was Matsuda that had found out that he had the legendary Kekkei Genkai of bone manipulation, by seeing Kyoichi heal his bones by simply focusing chakra to them. Knowing that healing himself was beyond Kyoichi's abilities, he had his blood tested for a bloodline, and then it was known. Kyoichi began focusing on making jutsu pertaining to his kekkei genkai, as it was a very rare bloodline and had plenty of potential.

He graduated the academy at the age of twelve, which was a bit earlier than most kids. Still, now he will be able to go on to entering a genin team and learning from his Jounin sensei.

RP-Sample:

A hazy morning for the village hidden in the mist, the villagers sluggishly getting out of bed to start on their jobs, the shinobi were already dressed with their weapons strapped tightly to their body and made their way to their jobs. The sun was barely visible through the mist that covered the village on the fine morning, but it gave the village a nice cool feeling.

Kyoichi was already awake, laying on a hill with a book in front of him, his eyes scanning the words quite quickly, turning the page every now and then. He enjoyed the time of day that was the early morning. It was like the calm before a storm, which led him to think that he could get some peace and quiet while still enjoying his book and nature.

It was a nice enough reason to drag himself out of bed for, and he even sometimes beat Ojisan for waking up.


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Affiliation: Kirigakure
Rank: Mizukage

PostSubject: Re: Shingen, Kyoichi    Thu Jul 15, 2010 7:23 pm

1) It doesn't make sense that you are 12 years old, and graduated at 11 becoming a Genin without being in a Squad - and if you plan on being in my Squad, you'll definitely want to make sure you graduated at age 12.

2) Your bone-daggers need a post-count duration. How long do they last regardless of the damage dealt to them?

3) Bone Restoration should vary in duration depending on the damage dealt, keep that in mind.

4) Your Bone Knuckles need a post-count duration, how long do the sharpened knuckles last regardless of damage dealt to them?

5) Your Hidden Blade of Bone needs a post-count duration, how long does it last regardless of damage taken?

6) Book Worm is a Genjutsu, Genin shouldn't have Genjutsu unless they specialize in it since Genin don't learn barely anything about Genjutsu in the Ninja Academy.

7) Also note, your character knows nothing of the basics: Body Replacement Technique, Body Flicker Technique, Transformation Technique, clone technique, etc... Most Ninja are taught most of those jutsu at the Ninja Academy.

8.) Your RP-sample should revolve around the character the app. pertains to; please make sure you fit it accordingly.

I'll take another look at this application when the corrections are made.


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Name: Kyoichi Shingen
Affiliation: Kirigakure
Rank: Genin

PostSubject: Re: Shingen, Kyoichi    Thu Jul 15, 2010 7:52 pm

1, 6, fixed. Though, you should have it up somewhere that Genin aren't allowed genjutsu unless they specialize in it, to avoid this problem in the future.

As for the bones, they are a solid material, and only chakra sharpened, so they last until Kyoichi discards them.

I assumed the basics came without saying, but if that's not the case, I'll edit.

And I'll work on the rp sample.
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PostSubject: Re: Shingen, Kyoichi    Thu Jul 15, 2010 7:54 pm

Kyoichi Shingen wrote:
1, 6, fixed. Though, you should have it up somewhere that Genin aren't allowed genjutsu unless they specialize in it, to avoid this problem in the future.

As for the bones, they are a solid material, and only chakra sharpened, so they last until Kyoichi discards them.

I assumed the basics came without saying, but if that's not the case, I'll edit.

And I'll work on the rp sample.

In Forum RPing (here anyways) weapons, or more long-term affects need a duration. So, please put a reasonable duration down for each bone-weapon; or use of bones in a similar fashion. Simply correct the techniques that I had asked above.

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Name: Kyoichi Shingen
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Rank: Genin

PostSubject: Re: Shingen, Kyoichi    Thu Jul 15, 2010 8:04 pm

Edited.

Also, are the basics a granted or should I edit them in?
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PostSubject: Re: Shingen, Kyoichi    Fri Jul 16, 2010 11:55 am

You'll need to add them as well, they are techniques essential to a Ninja nonetheless.

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PostSubject: Re: Shingen, Kyoichi    Fri Jul 16, 2010 5:16 pm

I added clone jutsu, body replacement jutsu, and transformation jutsu. Is that enough, or should I add more?
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PostSubject: Re: Shingen, Kyoichi    Sat Jul 17, 2010 12:26 pm

I noticed you've made the duration for your Bone-weapons 12 post, please lower it to 8-10 posts.

Otherwise there isn't much of a problem, and I'll take another look afterwards.

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PostSubject: Re: Shingen, Kyoichi    Sat Jul 17, 2010 12:30 pm

Edited them to nine posts, half way mark.

Is it true?

Am I... really... approved?
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PostSubject: Re: Shingen, Kyoichi    Sat Jul 17, 2010 12:32 pm

Lol. Congratulations...

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