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 MOE AND LEE (waiting for kiris permission)

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Name: Garovo Somoroku
Affiliation: Iwagakure
Rank: Jonin Commander

PostSubject: MOE AND LEE (waiting for kiris permission)   Thu Jul 15, 2010 2:29 am

Summoning Information

Pact: Giant Mole

Nature: earth, water

Chief: Moe

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Name: Moe
Personality: calm and relaxed
Appearance : A giant mole about the size of a large bear. Much smaller then his brother Lee. He and his brother have adapted to sunlight making their weakness as moles null. But there vision wile in light is quite limited everything is blurred to a degree that they see only shapes. But they also sense vibrations in the ground so this is still only a minor inconvenience as in if they enemy uses wind jutsu they will be utterly defenseless. Moe uses earth mainly but water is his minor. the moles have the ability to hold their breath for 1 posts under water.
Name: Lee
Personality: Thick headed and hotheaded
Appearance : A giant mole much larger than his brother Moe and has almost no intelligence but has a lot of brute force. He and his brother have adapted to sunlight making their weakness as moles null. But there vision wile in light is quite limited everything is blurred to a degree that they see only shapes. But they also sense vibrations in the ground so this is still only a minor inconvenience as in if they enemy uses wind jutsu they will be utterly defenseless. Lee uses the water element mainly but earth is his minor. Having the water element lets the moles have the ability to hold their breath for 1 posts under water.


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User: MOE AND LEE
Nature: Earth
Type: Collaborative
Class: A
Name: 地下の泥の泉の洪水 ~Chikanodoronoizuminokōzui ~Underground mud fountain flood
Description: MOE and LEE dig into the ground making tunnels leaving one central hole in the ground. Moe digging a little off to one direction splitting it into two holes after they get deep enough they turn around facing there mouths towards the entrance to the hole. Moe shoots a stream of mud and rocks up the tunnel and in perfect synchronization Lee will shoot a stream of high pressure water out of his hole and the two streams will combined together and spout from the top as a massive high pressure mud and rock s that fly up into the air and rain down and flood the area. Immediately after they stop sending the streams they rush up wards in a direction inadvertently making a deadly sink hole in the process. The area is turned into a flooded muddy water mess.
Drawbacks: this jutsu will cause 3 posts of rest for the two moles who will rest either under the earth or hiding somewhere topside out of view.
User: Lee
Nature: Water
Type: Offensive
Class: B
Name: 水はガンショット ~ Mizuwaganshotto ~ Water Shot Gun
Description: Lee focuses water chakra into his mouth shooting 1 to 4 high pressure bursts from his mouth at the enemy or where ever needed. These Water shots are fast enough to put holes in people at point blank but at a distance its really only used to knock back and or stun. The size of the bursts divides by the number of bursts.
Drawbacks: 4 post cool-down

User: Moe
Nature: Earth
Type: Offensive
Class: B
Name: ロッキーの泥散弾銃 ~ Rokkīnodorosandanjū ~ Rocky mud shotgun
Description: Moe focuses earth chakra into his mouth shooting 1 to 4 high speed bursts from his mouth at the enemy or where ever needed. These Mud shots are slow but the rocked mixed in travel at a high enough speed to put holes in people at point blank but at a distance its really only used to knock back stun or blind with mud temporarily. The size of the bursts divides by the number of bursts.
Drawbacks: 5 post cool-down

User: Moe and lee
Nature: N/A
Type: Offensive, Collaborative
Class: C
Name: 萌え風下ときめ き~ Mōekazashimotokimeki ~ Moelee crush
Description: Moe and lee directed by their master jump in unison towards a ,preferably trapped, enemy using all of their weight plus the force of gravity to hopefully crush or hold the enemy down.
Drawbacks: due to their size it takes 1 post to regroup and get back on their feet and another to prepare for another attack.
User: Moe , lee
Nature: N/A
Type: Defensive
Class: D
Name: モールはつかむ ~ Mōruwatsukamu ~ Mole grab
Description: a simple double hand grab. Used for holding and submission
Drawbacks: (Depending on the power, and size of this technique, it will need a drawback. This can be a cooldown, or a length of post-count time.)


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PostSubject: Re: MOE AND LEE (waiting for kiris permission)   Thu Jul 15, 2010 10:19 am

Garovo, you needed to be more patient then this... Couldn't you have made the app, and not added it to Jutsu Creation on the Forum?

You've sort of forced me into examining these Summonings, I'm not pleased. Neutral

However, your impatience has also shown me your determination, and desire to have these two summonings, and I'm nice enough to take a look at this application for you.

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PostSubject: Re: MOE AND LEE (waiting for kiris permission)   Thu Jul 15, 2010 10:22 am

1) Moles are not animals that can breathe underwater - and there are Ninja who use the Water Element but are shown not being able to breathe underwater either. So, you'll need to remove the fact that both Moles can breathe underwater.

Otherwise I don't see too many problems with this application.

However, I'll take a second look when the change is made.

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PostSubject: Re: MOE AND LEE (waiting for kiris permission)   Thu Jul 15, 2010 2:34 pm

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